tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811184877636109624.post9090572815117742923..comments2023-07-07T07:58:06.520-04:00Comments on Derrick Likes To Draw...: Illustration Academy HopefulDerrick Denthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06180602424002536132noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811184877636109624.post-16782802871923602402010-06-18T17:30:51.268-04:002010-06-18T17:30:51.268-04:00The color choices are looking great so far. Try no...The color choices are looking great so far. Try not to loose your value structure that you had, though. Its looking a bit dark. I also think it might look fantastic if you introduced some of that hair texture around the hand in more subtle tones around the rest of the figure. This might be a cheesy suggestion, but you might also try adding a tiny bit of a halo around the ship to make it look softer and illuminated. Be careful with the dark ships and the background because they're loosing a bit of the clarity I saw in the thumbnail... which may or may not be a bad thing. <br />Sorry for the super long crit. Can't wait to see what you do with it!Marie Provencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04155732927243498653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811184877636109624.post-17501945942999450212010-06-18T13:36:22.673-04:002010-06-18T13:36:22.673-04:00Thanks guys! I'm really excited about finishin...Thanks guys! I'm really excited about finishing this piece.Derrick Denthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06180602424002536132noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811184877636109624.post-53525767198268219942010-06-18T13:17:47.676-04:002010-06-18T13:17:47.676-04:00Thats looking really great.Thats looking really great.Justin Wheelerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05382265705067615738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5811184877636109624.post-40824923195687192132010-06-18T03:00:30.620-04:002010-06-18T03:00:30.620-04:00Absolutely beautiful. Here's hoping that you g...Absolutely beautiful. Here's hoping that you get the scholarship that you deserve!James Claytonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02649874906360931246noreply@blogger.com